Devising: Day 27


Today, we continued on with our 3rd script. We had previously finished our 2nd script, so we decided to give what we had written a read through to make sure it sounded okay and read properly. We made annotations to this original piece, re wording lines to make them flow better giving the script a greater cohesion. We then, made the corrections to the original script on the laptop.

Our third script however, needed adjusting. We wanted to give our sarcastic character the right lines to bring out the comedy value and mix the seriousness of the topic with some humour. But finding these lines was a difficulty. We experimented with several but needed one that packed a punch, without sounding immature