Devising: Day 15

With our new and improved script, we performed our piece to our teacher. Whilst he sad that the content was very good, the way we set it out and worded particular phrases were not how a meeting would usually proceed. Working with him, we annotated our scripts, re wording lines, adding some lines in to develop the characters we wanted to show in the scene. Another area that we worked on was the tone and mood generated. Previously, our scene was inaccurate in how we portrayed this meeting scene. However, by asking our teacher about how meetings actually went, and with his guidance, we began to build up an idea of how one would unfold. That they aren't as serious as we were making out, allowing us to make the scene a little more comical as a result. Which is what we were aiming for.